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Your first year of college was going well, with a few exceptions, but nonetheless it was great. The dorm room that you stayed in was quaint and decorated the way you like it. Your roommate, Lili Zwingli, was the sweetest person you had ever met. The cafeteria food could have been better, and your professors could be more lenient, but for the most part, you couldn't really complain.

You had just returned to campus from the long winter's break, which could have been longer in your opinion. You and Lili talked about what you two did over break as you both unpacked and settled into the dorm room. It was as if you two had never separated. With everything unpacked and settled, you and Lili left the room to grab something to eat. As you two walked down the stairwell, you found yourself at a standstill with a box sloppily labeled, “Al's stuff.”

“Mind getting out of my way?” said a voice behind the box. The 'voice' was clearly agitated.

You apologized and made room for the person to continue up the steps. As he passed you, you took note of his tattered brown leather jacket; his dark, burgundy hair; and a grumpy expression that took play on his face. The guys face was handsome, you admit, if it weren't for the dirty look he gave you.

You exchanged looks with Lili. When you two were out of hearing distance, you muttered, “How rude.... Do you believe that guy is transferring here? And into OUR building?!”

Lili nodded. “Maybe he just needs some time to get use to the school. We do start our new classes tomorrow.”

“... I guess. But I have a bad feeling about this guy....”

“You said the same thing about my brother.”

“W-well, he's an exception.”

You remembered the first time you met Lili's older brother, Vash. He didn't want his little sister out of his sights, which meant that he didn't want her away from home. You thought he was a little too overprotective of Lili. However, after weeks of convincing, you finally were able to get his sister to dorm with you (with Vash's permission of course).

You secretly hoped that the new guy wasn't as bad as he appeared to be. Who knows? Maybe he's just having a bad day, and your chances of becoming friends with him are not as slim as you thought.


“Alright...” you fumed. “It's been two days and Al is on my last nerve.”

On the first day, you found out that Alfred F. Jones, who preferred to be called Al, was in most of your classes. It didn't bother you until you realized that he kept staring at you and following you around. On your way to one class, you thought you could make a quick slip into the bathroom and wait until he passed by. However, much to your dislike, he was casually waiting against the wall across from the woman's bathroom. Why you didn't confront him at that time was beyond you. Maybe you were scared?

On the second day, you were on stealth mode. You kept your eyes wide open for the next time Al would show up. You felt paranoid and ridiculous, but you were determined to ask him why he was openly stalking you. Again, much to your dislike, he was no where to be seen. It was as if he vanished, or he was just your imagination. But when you came back to your dorm building, you saw him lazily walk back into his room. You were going to march up to him and demand answers, but you were exhausted from the day full of classes.

Instead, you vented out your angst to Lili. She wiped some of the sleep from her eyes as you started putting on your clothes. You had just came back from your morning shower with complaints about Al. As you were walking back to your room, Al walked passed you and pinched your -ahem- ass cheek. You were going to slap him, but you didn't want to risk your towel falling off.

“Hopefully you can talk to him today,” said Lili. “Third times the charm.” She gave you a little smile, and you sighed.

“Hopefully. If that bastard decides to go to class today.”

It was noon and you just got out of your first class. Al's name was on the roster, but he wasn't there (no surprise). However, when you walked into the hallway, you felt cold eyes boring onto you. You looked to your left and saw Al looking right at you. His red eyes and smirk looked almost menacing. You were tempted to run, but you were frozen under his stare.

“Like what you see, dollface?” he jeered. This pissed you off.

“It's _____, not 'dollface', okay? And where the hell have you been? You're suppose to be in this class.” You pointed in the classroom you were just in.

“After the first day, I got tired of going to all of my classes. All the professors are really boring. I'll start going to class when things start getting interesting.”

You scoffed. “Interesting? You're suppose to go to class to learn something. Not go whenever you feel like it.”

“You can say what you like, dollface. But I'm not going to just because you tell me to.”

“Fine. Do whatever you please,” you said drily. You turned to walk away. “Oh, and stop following me.”

“Like I said before: I'm not going to just because you tell me to.” He was walking along side of you, and you just looked away, trying to ignore him.

It's going to be a long day... you thought.


You made it back to your room, annoyingly tired from fighting Al all day. He scared away most of your friends, forcing you to eat lunch alone with him. He followed you to all of your other classes but didn't intend on actually attending the lectures. You were able to force him into some of them only because you knew that he took the same classes and thought it would annoy him. Which it did, thankfully.

You threw your backpack aside and plopped onto your bed. A little nap sounds nice. I'll probably wait for Lili to get back from her class and then we can get dinner together. With that thought in mind, you shoved your thoughts about Al out of your mind and drifted off to sleep.


You woke up two hours later. The room was dark, and so was your window. Lili wasn't in the room, nor did it look like that she ever stopped by the room. You looked at the clock, and realized that she should have been back from her last class an hour ago. You then checked your phone for any missed messages. None. You were starting to get worried.

Lili and you had a little system going because her brother made you responsible for his sister's safety. You and Lili would always have a copy of each other's schedules and always inform each other where they are if anything came up. If Lili went missing and Vash found out, you were dead. Maybe not in the literal sense, but still you'd be in big trouble.

You tried not to panic, and called Lili's cell phone. With each ring, you grew more worry. When the first call wasn't successful, you waited another minute and tried again.

You let out a sigh of relief when you heard the other line pick up. “Lili, where are you? I was beginning to worry-”

“Lili can't answer the phone right now.” You froze. There was a male voice on the other line, and they had Lili's phone. Panic was starting to set in and you couldn't breathe. “But~” the voice continued. “If you want to talk to her, come to Room 333.”

Wait....WHAT?! you internally screamed. You ended the call and marched out of your room. You stormed to the boy's hall on your floor and started pounded on Al's door.

“ALFRED. OPEN THIS DOOR RIGHT NOW BEFORE I-” You almost fell in when the door suddenly flew open. Al stood right in front of you and Lili was standing right behind him.

“Hey, dollface~” Al greeted.

“Shut up,” you told him off. “Lili, are you okay?!”

Lili nodded. “I'm okay. I was talking to Al.”

You stared at her in disbelief. “What...? S-so he didn't kidnap you o-or hurt you or anything?”

“Um, well, he did steal my phone.” She looked down,shyly. “But he promised to give it back. He just wanted to talk to you, but didn't know how to.”

“I'm sure he could have came up with a more creative idea...” you glared at Al, who only smirked in response. “Anyway, let her go Al. You didn't have to stoop this low just to talk to me.”

“Yeah, but it was fun seeing you all fired up. I honestly thought it was worth it.” He gave Lili back her phone and allowed her to leave.

“I'm sorry for the inconvenience, _____. I didn't mean to cause you any trouble.”

“It's alright, Lili. As long as you're okay. I can handle Al myself.” Speaking of who, Al swiftly pulled you into his room.

“You might have to eat dinner alone, Lili. It's going to be a long talk.” Then he shut the door.

You looked around Al's room. It was a double, just like yours except the other bed didn't have a bed set. There were half packed boxes laying on the floor and on the unused bed and desk. You were a bit petrified by the mess, especially when your eyes caught onto a baseball bat with nails embedded into it.

“So,” you started. “What were you talking about with Lili?”

“It's none of your business,” he shrugged.

“It is my business. She's my roommate and friend and I have to look out for her. Otherwise, her brother's not going to let her dorm here with me.”

“Don't worry your pretty little head off, _____. Her brother won't find out. If you do me a favor.” His evil grin sent a shiver down your spine. You stared at him with your (e/c) eyes, trying to see through his scheme. You gulped.

“What kind of favor?” You held your poker face, but it was starting to falter when Al started walking towards you. You backed away, only to be stopped by his desk. He puts his hands on the desk, trapping you like a cornered mouse.

“A simple favor. You become mine, and Lili's brother won't hear a word about what happened.”

“And if I don't? What then?”

Al chuckled darkly. What he did next took you by surprise. He grabbed wrist and tossed you onto his bed, pinning you underneath him. You struggled, but Al was sitting on your stomach and had both your hands above your head. He loomed over you. Fear was overcoming your urge to fight back. Al was much larger than you and most likely more powerful. He was definitely scarier, too.

“T-this is sexual harassment, you know. I-I could have you a-arrested,” you threatened. You tried to remain tough, but it was more difficult with your body trembling under his.

“It's not sexual harassment if you like it.”

You were going to question him, but he cut you off with his lips. Al used his hand to keep your head from turning away, freeing one of your hands. You tried to push him off, but he was much heavier than you were and hitting him didn't do anything either. It frustrated you at how good the kiss was. And it bothered you even further when Al started running his other hand up and down your side; his thumb edging beneath your shirt. Both your hands were free from his grasp, but it didn't matter. Slowly, you started to melt into the kiss. It was passionate and hot, which caused your mind to turn into a steamy haze. It scared you at how much you liked it.

“Told ya you'd like it,” Al panted. You didn't say anything. You were still recovering from the lack of oxygen in your brain. In the back of your mind, though, you didn't care that you looked like a hot mess. Your stomach was exposed and the blush on your face was warm.

“So what's your answer, dollface?”

“Mmm...?” you thought out load. Then you propped yourself up on your elbows. “I still think you're an asshole. But... I guess I'll say yes. On one condition.”


“I am not your property. Got it?”

“Whatever, babe.” He leaned in and kissed you gently, which was strange. But then you squeaked when he slapped your thigh.

You left the room in an angry fit, leaving your new beau with a fresh hand print across his cheek. Lili owed you big time.
God, it's been a while...

I've been having terrible writers block for the past month. I think I still have it, hence this story... it's just the beginning of my recovery. So, hope that this one will get the ball rolling in my head. That way I can continue writing more.

Normally, I prefer regular Alfred, but Al isn't too bad either. :iconyay2pamericaplz:

Hetalia belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:
You belong to yourself :icon2pamericaplz:
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hetalia-is-luv Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Student Writer
PervyMoni PervyMoni PervyMoni PervyMoni PervyMoni awesome smiley animated 
bree25 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
is there a number 2
Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
I enjoyed this very much ^___^
crossoversaremylife Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Most people aren't sure of what they really want in life. I received this letter

from a friend on the computer, did what it told me to, and within a week,

everything I had wished came true!! Here's an exact copy,




1. To yourself, say the name of the only guy or girl you wanna be with 3


2. Think of something you wanna accomplish within the next week and say

it to your self 6 times!!

3. If you had 1 wish what would it be? say it to yourself 9 times!!!

4. Think of something that you want to happen between you and that

1special person and say it to your self 12 times!!!

5. Now, heres the hard part! Pick only 1 of these wishes and as you scroll

down focus and concentrate on it and think on nothing else but that wish.

* *

* *

* *

Now make one last & final wish about that one wish that you picked.

After reading this, you have 1 hour to send it out to 15 people, and what

you wished for will come true within in one week!

u only get one chance!!!!! Now scroll down and think of your



Did you think of your crush? I hope so, that was your last chance. Now

pay very close attention this important message!

Sorry but once read, must be sent. Yes, this is one of those kinda chain
letters that everyone hates. This one has been going since 1864 and if you
break this chain, you will pay!!!!!! Remember that after hearing these

First Example:

Take Barbra Wallace.. She was a pretty lucky girl, up till she got this same
chain letter. She had a crush on the same kid since kindergarden. when she
got this mail she didn't pay any attention to it. She just thought, no big deal.
And deleted it. The next day her dad got fired and her mom dies in a car
crash. If she would have sent the letter none of that would have happened
and her mom would be alive.

Second Example:

Try Freddie D. Now Freddie D. was your average nerd. Had glasses, was
short and chubby, was in gifted. All the signs of
your total dork. He also received this letter and sent it to 51
people in the hour. Now, like Barbra, he had a crush on a girl since 3rd
grade. The next day after sending the chain the girl confessed her love for
him ever since 3rd grade. Freddie D. finally had the courage to ask her out,
and of course, she had been waiting to yes to that for years. They grew up
and married each other to live happily forever.

Now, you heard the stories. I know which person i'd rather
be, but thats up to you. I wouldn't wanna end up like Barbra but thats only

me. We all want what we cant have but now's ur chance to go out withthat

special somebody ur waiting for. Take it or leave it. If you send this to-

1 person- you will lose all luck in ur love life..... forever!!!!!

10 people- your crush will say they like you as a friend...... ONLY!!!!!

15 people- your crush will say they like you

20 people- your crush will ask you out!

25 people- your crush will kiss you!!

30 people - Your crush will have sex with you

35 people or more- All of the above!!

Don't blow it, it's ur chance to shine! Have everything u wanted, and more!

Now, complaining cus u dont have any
friends. Well theres an answer 4 everything. It's simple, just go in a chat

room, pick some names and send away! but here's the catch..... you only

have 1 hour
if the pain goes on im not gonna make it...!
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
hahahahaha!!!! oh Al, how you amuse me so. but you are lucky that i do like you. a lot.
rosyxD Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
EonBlack Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I agree. PART TWO PWEASE!!!!! Clap 
ShionxZero Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yahoo!! Lets hear it for part 2...............please?
Sammaster0524 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
SoraGotDidByThatRiku Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I LOVE this
ChiyoAdmin Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist
I love the story completely, :iconotakuingplz: Buuuut :iconwaitplz: his name is Allen Jones or Jason Jones, more commonly known as Allen. 
dragonsong56 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
*Looks at description* ... I swear to god, I will reclaim myself. I belong to me... Hopefully.
shamankingfan13 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Artist
Part 2, part 2! :iconpervymakaplz:
ParisBonnefoy3 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I get writers block too. But I loved this. And the ending rocked. Slapping Al in the face thats hilarious. Hope u right more! ^w^ <3<3<3<3<3
Caty34576 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondivaplz:Bitch,Can't tame me :icondivaplz:
XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Lmao! the last part was funny he slap reader chans Thigh and she gave him a slap on the face double lmao! :D
lmaoshortie1224 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist
It was strangely fluffy... but badass... I like it!
LucasandLoba Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Filmographer
Fucking... awesome... and ..... fluffy....
BlackRosesNeverDie Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WAITWAITWAITWAIT. I am three sentences in and already love this. Lili is my roommate? :D She is my favorite Hetalia girl! I love you, Lili...
cantthinkofusername1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

0-0. I recognized the first 9 paragraphs, word for word-and I've never read this fanfic before!


vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
deja vu?
cantthinkofusername1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

no-I HAD read it before, but I hadn't... I'm not making any sense. It's really hard to explain.

So, while I struggle for words, enjoy this picture I found in 'community emoticons' of Italy eating Paaasssstttttaaaa~!


cantthinkofusername1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer


srry, typo

blueblue930 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I want more :D !!!!!!!!
This was good !!
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist Thank you! Here's the continuation of it.
blueblue930 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks !!!!! 
xXmooncrystalXx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconletmehugyouplz:<--- this is pretty much what the rael alfred would have done
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
most definitely :iconamericahappyspazzplz:
14pip14 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Al is perfect for me. And one more thing. I WANT THAT BAT.
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icon2pamericaplz::iconsaysplz: In your dreams
14pip14 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
How bout in your nightmares.
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icon2pamericaplz::iconsaysplz: that too >.>
14pip14 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
koolsydlol Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sooooooooo Amazing yay
And I just learned how to use icons yaaaaay
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icon2pamericaplz: Hell yeah!
koolsydlol Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Heck yeah
koolsydlol Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student General Artist
She owes me all of her cakes for ten years.After that,I'll see how I am.
MidniteSunavow Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Lili owes me chocolate. Yep. She does.
vivid-strike Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
a lot of chocolate would be fair :3
MidniteSunavow Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
A whole box of it. That contains 30 Toblerone. (X3 I'm addicted Toblerone.)
Tsubasa10126 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student Filmographer
what the heck Englands better
otakuartist16 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
am i rooming with lichenstien?!(excuse my spelling)AWESOME, shes a pretty cool kid :3
Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Writer
handprint across the face yep that's me
BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it!!!!!!!
vivid-strike Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!!!!!!!
Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
I loved that ending XD
vivid-strike Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good :3 I was feeling kinda sassy the day I wrote it
LinksHetalianSheikah Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Is it wrong that from "You made it back to your room, annoyingly tired from fighting Al all day. He scared away most of your friends, forcing you to eat lunch alone with him." and on a little voice in my head was whispering, "That damned bastard...Kill him where he stands...Use your knowledge of fighting to make him unable to reproduce (really strong kick to the nuts), make it hard to breathe (punch right below the diaphragm), cut off his remaining air (very swift punch to the throat at the right angle), and beat the rest of the life out of him...This f-ck-r needs to learn that you do not harass woman this way!" until the end of the story?

...Well, the voice changed from “A simple favor. You become mine, and Lili's brother won't hear a word about what happened.” on; it made the voice furious and I nearly destroyed my computer in sheer frustration of wanting to kill Al for the impending sexual rape. Luckily there was none, so that voice instead change into screaming at the reader, "YOU IDIOT! DON'T SAY YES! UGH, NOW SOONER OR LATER I'LL HAVE TO BE TELLING YOU NOT TO GO INTO THE CELLAR!"

But all-in-all, this was a great story :) I can tell because never have I ever had such an urge to throw my laptop at something before and kill a nonexistent person. If a story can make me feel like that, or any strong emotion really, then it's a great story :) All I have to point out is towards the end; “'Mmm...?' you thought out load." Out load? Aloud or out loud?
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