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"No."

"Come on. Say it."

"I said no."

"Pleeeeeeease, _____." He begged.

"Okay." You gave a little shrug.

"Really?!" His face brightened up with hope.

"No."

Alfred dropped his shoulders and made some sort of whale noise to express his frustration with you. He had been following you around more recently and more persistently and it was starting to annoy you. It's not that you didn't want to say it. You really did. It's just that... you hated the feeling in admitting it. Saying those words made you want to run as far as your legs could carry you. Saying those words made your stomach twist in strange ways. Saying those word would mean giving yourself up to the wind. You promised yourself never to say those words.

"Just give up already." You said, tired of his fruitless effort.

"A hero NEVER gives up! I'll make you say it. Even if it takes me FOREVER."

This time it was your turn to make whale noises.

"Good luck with that." Your words dripping in sarcasm.

"Thanks!" Alfred showed off his goofy toothy grin. You rolled your eye. "Now say it!"

"NO!" Then you ran off.

However, that wasn't the last time you encountered Alfred. Multiple times during the day, he would pop up out of nowhere telling you to 'say it.' At the bus stop, in the classroom, in the hallways, notes in your locker, on your way home, even on your second floor bedroom window. This has been going on for days and it was really starting to wear down your nerves.

"Come on, _____." He whined even more. "Just say it. Say it! We all know ho-"

"Alfred...." You rubbed your temples. "Give up already. I'm NOT going to say it."

"Please." You glanced over at him and noted that he was giving you that sad, pleading puppy dog look. You didn't say anything. "Please." He scrunched down so that he was looking up at you and you were looking down at him. "Pleeeeease." Again, you said nothing. So, Alfred got a little closer. "Please." Then he swiftly kissed your cheek. You refused to let your poker face slip, but at this point, your face was dusted with a light shade of pink. "Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease."

"Mmmm, fine." You mumbled, looking in the other direction.

"Yeah!" Alfred jumped and punched the air. "Now say it."

You sighed. Guess there's no turning back. You could only hope that you don't regret it later. You took a deep breath and hoped Alfred doesn't notice how red your face was.

"I love you, Alfred...."

For a moment, Alfred was quiet, which was unusual. Since you were looking else where, you turned your sights to Alfred's face, trying to read his expression. There was a soft look on his face; his blue eyes, his smile, they were giving your stomach a twist, but it was a warm, pleasurable one. It was a bit awkward since he was just smiling at you without a word, so you decided to speak up.

"Um, hello? I said it. Aren't you going to say it back?"

"Oh? Sorry 'bout that. I got caught up in the moment. I love you too, _____. And don't worry. I'll always be your hero."

Upon hearing those words, your lips cracked a small smile. You had to admit, there was a satisfying feeling in hearing them.

"Soooooo, wanna go on a date with me?" Alfred asked.

"... Huh?"

"A date. You. Me. At good 'ole McDonald's?"

"... No."

"WHAT?! WHY NOT?!"

"'Cause." You started walking away.

"Wait! 'Cause why? Tell me. W-we can go somewhere else if you want."

"Nope."

"_________." He whined yet again. "Date me!"

"No." Luckily, Alfred was following behind you because you couldn't hold back another smile.

Here we go again.
Oh, Tsundere!Reader... you are such a tease.

So here's a short reader insert that I wrote. It proabaly took me 2 hours at most to write. I'm just so tired from college (not in a bad way) and I wanted to write a new story since my other stories in progress are still in progress... so yeah.

Hope you enjoy!

Hetalia belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:
You belong to you (except Alfred is trying to change that :iconhawtamerica3plz:)
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:iconlillyshere:
LillysHere Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
That was me in middle school 8th grade they would ask me to date them almost every month and thank god it was over
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4EverSlendermansGirl Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You should add a small sequel with him doing this during a conference! XD
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4EverSlendermansGirl Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She's trolling you Alfred! XD :icontrololoplz:
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DatFangirlingApple Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 :Trolled: #2 
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evilX23 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this reader-chan >D
But it would've been even more trollish if she said "It" instead of "I love you." at first o3o
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Nightcoregirl101 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
" You belong to you (except Alfred is trying to change that) "


....That made me fall off my chair and scare the shit out of my cat xD Good job~
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TejinaGirlForever Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014

WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! AMERICA BE TROLLED!!! :icontrolololoplz:

Awesome story!

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Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
i love this one, because its soooo what I would do 
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Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
omg alfie xD
alfred:i told you guys! a hero never gives up! =3
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:iconfirebirdphoenix7:
firebirdphoenix7 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
this was a good story! I loved it!
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EmilyPuzzle Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whale noises? XD
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:iconwxzhenghoppytruffles:
wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aw!
sounds like me.
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:iconwxzhenghoppytruffles:
wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
and alfred, Mcdonalds is bad for you!
dont want you to develop man boobs!
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The PixelPalette Award  You deserve this for that comment xDD
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:iconwxzhenghoppytruffles:
wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsaluteplz: thanks!
I will use it to my.... err... up-most ability?
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That or you can put it in a trophy case or somethin and let it gather dust your choice :shrug: 
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wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ooh, that is such a hard choice....
I know, I can use it to beat up whoever's bloody idea was to add chemicals and awful things to fast food!
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hoho that is a wonder idea!~ Evil Angry Face Emoticon. 
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wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhigurashiplz: I would apologize in advance for staining the trophy, but this is a bloody great idea.
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drey524 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Lol nice
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:iconfloridadaawesome:
Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
You belong to you (except Alfred is trying to change that) don't worry Alfie I'll help ya out with this one 
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Ayano-Otori Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha…whale noises…XD
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:icon4spirits:
4spirits Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
maybe he should try humpback
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WillowWalker45 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, 'cause I think he sounded a little "Orca-ish"! :icondoryplz:
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XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Lmao! true!
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:iconayano-otori:
Ayano-Otori Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha, omg XD
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ChaoticScribbling Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Awwww this was really cute xD very well written :)
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vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbowplz: thank you
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:iconchaoticscribbling:
ChaoticScribbling Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
You are very welcome :)
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TheDerpMasterOfDoom Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
ERMAHGERD, YISSSSS that's definitely me!!!
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:iconvivid-strike:
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
La la la la  YAYYYYYYY
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Omni-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconhawtamerica2plz: ACK! America I really do hope the japanese create a way for us hetalia fans to meet one day...ONE DAY!
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:iconvivid-strike:
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhawtamericaplz: OMG YES I WILL NOT DIE UNTIL THAT DAY COMES
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:iconomni-chan:
Omni-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
EXACTLY. WAIT FOR ME BABEH //reaches to america picture// :iconsexyamericaplz:
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Sunsetmustang Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Waaiiit for me D:
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:iconomni-chan:
Omni-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
x'D
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xSWEETFANGx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
that was SOOOOOO Kawiia!!!!!!!
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vivid-strike Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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kanesanubis12 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This would soooooo be me
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Kuromi1234 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww, I'd say yes to Alfred in a heartbeat XD
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vivid-strike Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure you and more than half of the people who read this would too :3
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Kuromi1234 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah XD He's just that amazing.
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14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
if you stop whining ill go out with you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconvivid-strike:
vivid-strike Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyayamericaplz::iconsaysplz: ALRIGHT!!!
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Ilovesimsdays Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Never give up. Thats what this story means
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vivid-strike Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconamericaapprovesplz:
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Animefanatic4eva Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
oh america~
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rstoker2017 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student General Artist
lol, sweet story. ^^ def a fav
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rstoker2017 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student General Artist
oh & for the record, he already kinds owns me. XD
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Greenleeklover1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
That's so like me. At one point I would snapped and run saying never. I'd probably be stressed and angry causing an country accent. It would take a while for me to say those words. They are embarrassing
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